Panel 4 is supposed to be showing a dust cloud. Not very well done, I know. At some point, I hope to come up with a good way to depict super speed, because my efforts have been laughable so far.
Also: that freaking ring. I own the ring I use as reference, so it's not that I can never remember the pattern, but dang that knotting pattern is annoying to draw. I know at a point later I kind of cheat it. It doesn't really look right on this page, as it is, and this is the best view of it.
Take note of which finger the ring is on. You'll see where I screw up later, and it switches hands multiple times. Should only be on her right hand (as on this page), since a left hand ring on the ring finger kind of has a meaning that doesn't apply to me.
Don't ask me where Blitzer went. I seem to have just had him on page 1. Should still be barking his head off at this point.
Also: that freaking ring. I own the ring I use as reference, so it's not that I can never remember the pattern, but dang that knotting pattern is annoying to draw. I know at a point later I kind of cheat it. It doesn't really look right on this page, as it is, and this is the best view of it.
Take note of which finger the ring is on. You'll see where I screw up later, and it switches hands multiple times. Should only be on her right hand (as on this page), since a left hand ring on the ring finger kind of has a meaning that doesn't apply to me.
Don't ask me where Blitzer went. I seem to have just had him on page 1. Should still be barking his head off at this point.