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shastab24 Wed, March 24, 2021 edit delete
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The flash of light was something I included after sending the script to Dave (the creator of Grrl Power). Originally, the leader just was going on their ramble and pressed the button and the portals took everyone away. But Dave pointed out that Maxima, with her super speed, could easily have flown up to him and taken him out in that time. So, the flash of light is to specifically disorient her. Maybe I could have mentioned that somewhere on the page, but such is as it is. But now that I think of it, the rewrite of this page (which I'd lost, but remembered the gist) actually had the leader being sucked through the portal in panel 2, to make it more of the characters escaping immediately after the flash of light, and less likely for Maxima to recover and go after the leader fast enough.