Wed, February 26, 2020 in Issue 13: Revelation of Atrocities

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shastab24 Wed, February 26, 2020 edit delete
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That ends this issue. What did you think? Please let me know below.

Also, as of writing this, I'm just realizing that Captain Nazi's gun changes hands between panels. I didn't mean to do that.

Anyways, Captain Courageous steps up to take command. As much as I love Captain Marvel (and he's easier to draw), I recognize Captain Courageous might be a better leader. After all, his whole schtick is about courage, so he would seem natural to step up and get the job done. Captain Marvel is still just 10 year old Billy Batson at the end of the day. He's out of his depth in leading an offensive of this magnitude. Overall, I imagine he's just barely holding himself together after what he's seen.

But this will bring us into issue 14. These issues flow into each other a bit more than the fantasy story, which is interesting to me. Also, I should mention, issue 14 is the conclusion of my characters' jaunt into this world. Then we move onto newer stories, where hopefully I can have my characters' personalities better defined. I know that's a flaw currently in these stories (despite things I wrote at around the same time which did clearly define characters' personalities, like in Karabear Comics Unlimited.