Page 5: issue 12 - The Big Apple and the Big Red Cheese

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shastab24 Tue, January 21, 2020 edit delete
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The halfway page of the issue and I finally get to what the title's referring to? Not the best way to go. Also: I could have tweaked that establishing shot (or simply drawn it rather than use a public domain photo), but I was not giving myself the time (and I'm bad enough at backgrounds that I sometimes try to avoid drawing them, despite never being able to improve with that attitude).

I never went back and revised the script, but I don't like some of the stuff here. Flame Thrower should be concerned for Rearranger. He's her brother, after all. Also, her biological father has been knocked out, but she's not even commenting on that. Sure, in this situation, I do feel Mineral would have the strongest reaction, but he shouldn't be the only one with a reaction. Also, Multiblades, show some sympathy for Rearranger. Not only is he your brother's boyfriend, but your girlfriend's brother.